Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the preceding decades, the job has played a paramount role in human beings’ lives. Today it is axiomatic that people usually elapse the longer part of their life working. Some people possess the conviction that it is important that parents can encourage their teenage children to take a part-time job in order to prepare them for adult life, while others hold exactly an opposite view. Whether one agrees or disagrees with this depend on the lens through which one is looking. I firmly contend that persuading teenage children to take a part-time job by their parents is one of the best ways to prepare them for adult life. In what follows, I am going to aptly delve into the most outstanding reasons to advocate my viewpoint.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that teenage children can be more independent from their parents’ supervision by having a part-time job. Also, they can earn some money although it may not be adequate. To spell out the importance of dependence, it should be born in mind that every success stems from being independence. In my own experience, when I was about 15 years old, I worked in addition to studying. This issue made me feel more satisfied with myself because I could buy most things with money I acquired by working. A recent study conducted by scientists of university of Virginia on the people revealed that 90 percent of successful people are those who had a part-time job in their teenage years and thus they were made an independent personality.
Another equally noteworthy point supporting this opinion is that the part-time job can pave the way for obtaining new insights and experiences about different jobs. Young people are a novice at working, so it is pivotal for them to learn some skills. In essence, these jobs can intensify their chance to land a profitable vocation in the near future. As an example, the majority of companies employ people who have enough experience in their work. According to a survey conducted in eight industrialized countries, known as G8, back in 2013, most of the recruited staff in these countries are those who know a lot of skills and have various expertise.
All the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that working and having a part-time job can be useful for teenage children in order to prepare them for their adult life. However, an important matter that must be mentioned is that my idea cannot be used as a prescription for everybody and some counterexamples might exist. Nevertheless, that was a story in a nutshell. As a result, I suggest conducting more surveys and studies to answer this question more precisely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88444444444 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81029852111 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542222222222 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8437012853 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364400431297 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102646822082 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130217506591 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230117085115 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129095667407 0.0645574589148 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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