Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents should encourage their children to learn a second language from early childhood.
Use specific reason and examples to support your answer.
It is generally stated that we live in an era which is called information age. Communication tools such as satellite and the internet have brought the people in the world much closer to each other and nowadays people all over the world can be informed of every news, events or science advances in a fraction of a second which occurs even at the farthest corners of of the plant. It seems that we all live in village and that's why the world is called global village. To become successful and rise to prominence in this worldwide village, everybody needs to communicate perfectly with the other people in the world or as it was mentioned the global village. Germane to this fact, a question that is matter of debate, a controversial one, is whether learning a second language in childhood is essential or not. Although some parents might think that mother tongue is enough for their children, I'm personally on the conviction that it is absolutely necessary to learn a second language from childhood to live in this global village.
To start out with in an internationally growing economy, communication with companies from other countries has a significant role in making money and to get a bigger part in worldwide trading it is essential to be capable of talking with people from other countries. Learning a second language seems to be required for every applicant who want to start out their career and that can bring them much more opportunities not only in their very own country but also all across the globe. Further more many students wants to study in well-known universities in the world so they can get better job positions later and it is evident that learning another tongue in their childhood can make this much easier for them. Consequently learning a second language will open a path for everybody in the global village to follow their dreams professionally or educationally in each country of the world they please.
Another point which is equally important, if not more, is that education is key of success in every occupation. In recent days, there are a wide variety of internet resources about lots of jobs and everyone in world can use these adjunct educational videos to become a professional in every aspect they desire. It is apparent that for understanding and applying these internet resources in every profession, people must be able to comprehend an international language and the necessity of learning a second language is clear-cut for this purpose. As a result, with these available resources, the lack of formal education systems can be covered for everyone who has a goal of accomplishing success.However it might not be acceptable by all, because some people believe that using another language will affect the youth and their own culture might be affected by the other languages and cultures and the style of their living will badly change.
Becoming successful is a dream of every parent all around the plant for their children and teaching their kids a second language is precious gift from parents to the children for their future life which can open a hatch of opportunities for them later in adult life. And as a graduate student who can speak and communicate in other languages, I feel so confident and positive about settling abroad and working outside of my county.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'i feel', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224662162162 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.146959459459 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103040540541 0.0866891130778 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0439189189189 0.046263068375 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0472972972973 0.0685040099705 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146959459459 0.118717715034 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0388513513514 0.0351676179071 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79558067381 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287162162162 0.0309702414327 93% => OK
Particles: 0.00337837837838 0.00188951952338 179% => OK
Determiners: 0.119932432432 0.0887237588012 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0253378378378 0.0209618222197 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0152027027027 0.0139019557991 109% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3315.0 2387.08602151 139% => OK
No of words: 561.0 408.028673835 137% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90909090909 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349376114082 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260249554367 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192513368984 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112299465241 0.112833075102 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79558067381 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4688057041 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.9921480208 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0625 20.5533526081 171% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.3347933153 48.84282405 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 207.1875 120.699889404 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0625 20.5533526081 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.644075263715 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 61.0874554367 45.7405998639 134% => OK
Elegance: 1.72340425532 1.45489161554 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232698850514 0.300154397459 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140283993201 0.103427244359 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0738342046868 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571759998252 0.497263757937 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0987712933321 0.151897553556 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111598516615 0.114077575197 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636288989509 0.0781384742642 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.466139477095 0.336927656856 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0595057869732 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182179070037 0.210909579961 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344237157331 0.0618886996521 56% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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