Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
There is no doubt that nowadays, education plays the key role in the people’s lives. No one can deny the influence of education on our daily lives. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue are parents in today more than involved in their children’s education as were in the past? Some people may hold this viewpoint that parents more care their children’s education in the contemporary. However, some other may take an opposite view and believe that not changing parents involving in their children’s education during the time from past to today. From my own perspective, the first idea is true. In the what follows, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One of the reasons coming to mind at first is that education is the most important role plays in the upbringing children to prepare for future, job and society satiation. Therefore, Parents are trying more devoted to their money and time for children’s education. An empirical study in the Asia shows that the most family in the eastern counties have more attention to education and provide suitable facilities for their children who are most prospering to their future and getting a higher social rank than the other as in the overlooking with parents in their education. This clarifies the fact that we should be more accurate and sensitive in our children’s education to get the best result.
Another equally important reason is that from a psychological standpoint, in a modern life, by increasing stress and depression in between people, parents by taking psychologists and making their counsels foster in their children. Therefore, Children can get the best mentality and less anxiety in their future life.
The last but not the least reason is that in today’s parents participate in their children’s education with their teachers which have more effect on the education system. For example, when children have a low score in their exam. As a consequence, parents conduct their teachers for why their children have a low score? And other questions, they can figure out problems with contributing together and solve their problems and improve their skills and scores.
To wrap it up, it is my deep belief that “parents today are more involved in their children’s education”, by this approach in the society, children not only will be high morality, but will be good parents for their children as well. All in all, it is anticipated that in future people have a good and decent society rather than in the past
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13875598086 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99700330325 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476076555024 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6726548053 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.052631579 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321274937095 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114891164482 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841872304591 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202374292703 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532840868415 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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