Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries
When it comes to the issue of the people benefit from the travelling to foreign countries is greater than travelling in their country, some people may agree with this statement and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might strongly disagree with this idea and have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that travelling to different countries is more important than travelling in our country because there are so many reasons support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding this issue in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that travelling in different countries is more important than travelling in our country. Travelling to the new country will help us to meet new people from different culture. Additionally, making new friendships with people from different country whom have different habits. All that will increase our ability to communicate with different types of people.
Another reason why I advocate the advantage of the travelling to the different countries. If the person travel to many country, he will be easily adapted to the new situation that he may face in future. For instance, he may need to travel to the new city for work or study.
Finely, it is a well-established fact that travelling to different countries increase our imagination and knowledge. Meeting people from different culture whom has different job that we did not know about it before is very helpful to us in order to detect our future’s jobs. It is important to do what we like not just what we are used to do in order to develop, progress and to obtain a prosperity future.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion which that say, people who hold the opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much too be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...d to the new situation that he may face in future. For instance, he may need to travel to...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 337, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to doing'.
Suggestion: used to doing
...to do what we like not just what we are used to do in order to develop, progress and to ob...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 218, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to be'?
Suggestion: to be
...ople opinions are overwhelming too much too be ignored.
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.194594594595 0.229887763892 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.175675675676 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0972972972973 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405405405405 0.046263068375 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0783783783784 0.0685040099705 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113513513514 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0459459459459 0.0351676179071 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73237218557 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0540540540541 0.0309702414327 175% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0783783783784 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0297297297297 0.0209618222197 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.027027027027 0.0139019557991 194% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2008.0 2387.08602151 84% => OK
No of words: 337.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95845697329 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344213649852 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278931750742 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20178041543 0.174417080927 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151335311573 0.112833075102 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73237218557 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495548961424 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.1013468525 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4666666667 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6450656692 48.84282405 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.866666667 120.699889404 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.644075263715 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 50.3598417409 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.20183486239 1.45489161554 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331619504504 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.173481711456 0.103427244359 168% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101492961177 0.0752933317313 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.597496720049 0.497263757937 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167707774607 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134051343826 0.114077575197 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719866984953 0.0781384742642 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274869737759 0.336927656856 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0945549747737 0.067059652881 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196924731632 0.210909579961 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749743559199 0.0618886996521 121% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.