Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Regarding whether nowadays people spend too much time on personal recreation things they like to do rather than doing things they should do, different people hold divergent opinions. Some would maintain the standpoint that this statement is true because many people just seem to relax and enjoy themselves showed by the posted pictures on the Internet. I partly agree with their notion, however from my opinion, I disagree with this statement.
First, people today spend less time doing what they are really interested in and just finishing tasks they should do to make a living. As the fast development of our society, the pressure and stress on people become more and more. We had to face and finish what we should do to make a living in these fierce competing world, so the time we spend on personal enjoyment-doing things is compressed. According to a survey conducted by Wuhan university about the social pressure today in 2018, the result of it shows about 1/3 of people claim that they are less happy and joyful than the past because they have to spend much more time doing things they should do than on relaxed and enjoyment-doing things. Furthermore, even 40% of candidates say that they had to compress or even conceal the time they spend on the things what they are really interest in to compromise the time spending on the things they should do in study and work.
Second, under no circumstance should we acquire the real style and condition of a person's life from his/her social media, because it is the instinct of humans to show and behave the best side of their life in front of others. Nonetheless, many of us are suffering from pressures in the society and it comes to become a phenomenon that we spend much more time doing things we just need to do, but we post many pictures of enjoyment-doing things we like but rarely do on the Internet. Consider my own experience for example which can shed some light on this issue. I was a crazy fan of NBA and I nearly saw every game of Rocket. However I had to reduce my time watching the favorite basketball live show because of the heavy burden of my study and work tasks I should do. So every time others asked me why I had so much spare time watching games after they saw my posting pictures, I can just replied actually the pictures were from the Internet and I just only know the result.
Admittedly, it is undeniable that someone contends nowadays people can spend much more time on personal things they like because of the more relaxed regulations. However, the fact is people today had to spend much time doing things they are ought to do rather than doing things they like to do.
To sum up, whereas there is an argument that people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things rather than doing things they should do, namely the looser regulations nowadays, much more burden on people in this society, coupled with disaccord between pictures online and the real condition of people's life makes a strong case for the disagreement with this statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...quire the real style and condition of a persons life from his/her social media, because...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 628, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... and I nearly saw every game of Rocket. However I had to reduce my time watching the fa...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, really, regarding, second, so, whereas, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2523.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 534.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72471910112 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50177523975 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430711610487 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 774.0 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9390439315 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.411764706 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4117647059 20.6045352989 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.613627629619 0.236089414692 260% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233713910934 0.076458572812 306% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.205953696094 0.0737576698707 279% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.449549699949 0.150856017488 298% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103063661775 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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