People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
Some people argues that peoples are now involve themselves various entertainment task that's why they looses their valuable time and decline their significance.they cite this reasons are mainly for various entertainment availability like smart phone and decline people morality. However, i stronngly disagree with this statements and i feel that people are now very busy and doing that actually should rather than personal enjoyment most of the time. I will support my view point with three main reasons.
First of all, peoples are now busy and their business to increases day by day. everyone to doing something of their own perspectives like many of students, many to busy themselves to doing different jobs or lots of different business. it is ovbious that after certain of time people like to enjoying that actually they like but it does not mean that peoples attach themselves with their personal enjoyement most of the time. For example, i am a university student and i also do a part time job, thus when of all completed i back to the party with my friends or hangout my family member and this is not to the greater time ammount than my personal job that actuaaly i did. Moreover, according to the physochogist now people have losted their normal life style and happiness for to involve themselves plantiful exploitation and this phenomena is increases day by day and various negatively impacted of daily life. Thus, people directly or indirectly to busy them to doing something that actually should rather than entertainment purposes.
Second of all, people now like to doing something that actually provides satisfaction. it is sometimes seems that people are very joyfull during all the day and passing their times more funny and enjoyable way but it does not to indicate their personal bais. peoples are now try to collaborate their passion with their profession and alway trying to do something that actually satisfied them. For instance, i like to study in physics and i am not feel any boringness when i class or study or working in laboratory in any physics experiment. somedays ago in my laboratory i experiment in a low of relativity. although this subject matter is very complex but i doig this work very funny way thus my lab teacher apparently think that may be i not to concerned my task but after the experiment i submited my result very precious way and got highest mark. In addition, after that my physics teacher alway support me and respect my passion and my working procedure. Hence, is it mean that if someone enjoy their work and playfull all the time when they work means to they are not serious?
However, various entertaining tools are available in present time like smart phone or internet connection of every offices and every places and people involve them very easily different social side or searching internet and that's why people most of the time looses their valuable time. Nevertheless, this small amount of time's enjoyement helps to people to connect them and continue their
work again very concentrated way. For example, according to the neurologist report of last year, human brain can not wok consistantly more then two hours and needed five or ten minuets rest of others refressment doing. thus sometime during important task peoples needed some personal enjoyment and this is bring productivity.
In conclusion, from the above sum peoples are very much concern their own personal task that why people spend their life worthy way and after that enjoy their life that actually they prefer and without important work that actually should doping, not possible to make peoples life enjoyable. Hence,, do more, get more, live happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 13.8261648746 275% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3091.0 1977.66487455 156% => OK
No of words: 614.0 407.700716846 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0342019544 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.977853291 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64717708119 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438110749186 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 955.8 618.680645161 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8850074705 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.391304348 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6956521739 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17391304348 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 5.5376344086 614% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281358837397 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964879786361 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828911849258 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164378565885 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813569886236 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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