Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Nowadays children playing computer games make more and more parents worry, which leads to a total restriction of gaming. Personally, I believe that such an activity has many benefits and should not be banned. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. First of all, the restriction of the most popular children’s entertainment stands against democracy principles. Strict rules put youngsters under the pressure and can lead to a deep depression. The task of parents is to teach juniors to balance different aspects of a life. A direct confrontation is never a solution, as teenagers are stubborn. Furthermore, many of the available computer games are highly educative and requiring an analytical analysis capability. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I was addicted to computer games when I was younger and all taboos of my parents were simply a challenge for me. The correct approach to me was the explanation of the consequences of a constant gaming. Secondly, in the modern society gaming is a fast developing and well-paid job. Continuously, every year the number of professionals in this area grows. For instance, my friend is a famous professional gamer. Her job is not only well-paid, but also provides regular worldwide trips. A simple hobby transformed into a dream job. In conclusion, I believe that with a right time management there are no problems due to gaming. Forbiddance until a certain age is not the solution, as with a right approach it won not harm the quality of life. To be fully adapted to society, a child should get life lessons from different areas.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98175182482 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0428261685 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3344013747 48.9658058833 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.8421052632 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4210526316 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135128753444 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031431072148 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347733722554 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135128753444 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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