Do you agree or disagree with the following statement
Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The issue of whether children should not be allowed to play video games because it is a waste of time is very controversial. On one side, supporters of this idea believe that parents should kids play video games because it exercises their brains. On the other hand, critics consider that this kind of technology becomes children lazy and badass. My personal opinion is that children should not be allowed to play video games for a few reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the children’s brain is like a sponge that absorb everything they watch or hear. This kind of technology shows aggressive scenes of characters fighting with many types of guns that are not own for a kid. As a result, parents have a great responsibility not allowing or regulating these video games to their children. Mostly, kids that have access to this technology, such X-Box One, Nintendo, Ps four are children who demonstrate hyperactive behavior. Also, have been shown that there are a few diseases associated with playing video games, such us ADHD and those kids have to be treated by a health professional. That is why video games have to be controlled by parents. For instance, I am a doctor and have to medicated children with these disorders every day.
The second reason to be mentioned is that video games are of a great distraction for kids. There are kids than rather than being aggressive become sedentariness and lazy, so spend too much time playing games without realize that they have to do other activities. As a consequence, these kids could also develop different diseases such as diabetes and obesity.
A vivid example of this is my step son. He is eleven years old. His passion is plays video games. He never goes outside to play with his friends instead he spends all his time at home playing online and eating because the games give him anxiety and hungry. Last year we had to take him to the doctor because his blood sugar increased and he developed diabetes. If he was more active maybe he was healthier.
Finally, I would to mentioned that video games are not healthy for kids, they keep children disorientated and also create diseases that are not beneficial for children. Parents should not allow to kids play computers games.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...gy becomes children lazy and badass. My personal opinion is that children should not be allowed ...
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Line 4, column 361, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ar increased and he developed diabetes. If he was more active maybe he was healthi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, may, second, so, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81074168798 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61020717456 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9613842569 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7727272727 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13636363636 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258711101499 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815114452981 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074330205116 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154385386844 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726866053955 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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