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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: roy
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- TPO 35- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 63
- When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mails, they will produce better work for the project. 66
- Pets should be treated like family members. 76
- Some people take the view that older children can take care of younger children, some others may hold the view that taking care of children should be done by other adults. 70
- Integrated writing task 1 TPO 34 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 9, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to internet'.
Suggestion: to internet
...ould prohibit devices that can connect to internet to internet in classes. While many are adamant that...
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Line 27, column 120, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs fixed" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'fixing' or 'to be fixed'.
Suggestion: fixing; to be fixed
.... They acclaim that half of their needs fixed with internet. Reflecting upon all afo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2465.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47777777778 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7974635778 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 770.4 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.5195550564 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1666666667 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.45110844103 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 31.0 4.53405017921 684% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317653551788 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712618440784 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677865156618 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753075301075 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592709618427 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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