Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people involve themselves in several tasks at the same time in a trial to control everything. In my opinion, I believe that this behavior is wrong and should not be adopted. In this essay I will demonstrate my reasons for that disagreement.
To begin with, pursuing this way will distract people, so they can not concentrate on each task or do their best in it. As a result, they fail to succeed in anything. This is clearly obvious especially when the tasks are not related to each other. From my experience, I suffered from this for a long time. In the past, I had a binge for knowledge, I was used to take courses in various fields, just to collect information about different topics. Finally, I realized that what I learned in each subject was nothing. For that reason, I started to focus on only one thing at a time and give it all my attention and efforts.
Secondly, we do not have time for all the things we want to do. We have to follow the rule of step by step and set our priorities. This means to start with the most difficult or urgent one to finish it then resume to the next one. For example, if we have an exam and at the same time we have to learn a new skill to enhance our performance in the work, we must finish the task that has a deadline first then start learning the skill.
Lastly, to keep a good physical, mental and psychological health , we need to take it easy and do not hurry up to commit to all tasks at once. For instance, if we do that, we will be exhausted all the time and will not accomplish our targets. This in turn will affect us negatively and may suffer from depression and failure.
In the summary, one step at once is more effective than doing different things at the same time. This will have positive consequences on our time, health and performance.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives Use specific reasons and examples to su 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement For success in a future job the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 85
- Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to sc 70
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to taking'.
Suggestion: used to taking
...ast, I had a binge for knowledge, I was used to take courses in various fields, just to coll...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'resumes'?
Suggestion: resumes
...fficult or urgent one to finish it then resume to the next one. For example, if we hav...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hysical, mental and psychological health , we need to take it easy and do not hurr...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36390532544 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51702463692 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.048520703 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6315789474 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143753117742 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478310838944 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576698296303 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857862250733 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258433490351 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to taking'.
Suggestion: used to taking
...ast, I had a binge for knowledge, I was used to take courses in various fields, just to coll...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'resumes'?
Suggestion: resumes
...fficult or urgent one to finish it then resume to the next one. For example, if we hav...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hysical, mental and psychological health , we need to take it easy and do not hurr...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36390532544 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51702463692 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.048520703 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6315789474 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143753117742 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478310838944 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576698296303 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857862250733 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258433490351 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.