Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Modern society and life style have imposed ample of tasks on people. As the world continue to develop, people learn better how to orient themselves with new situation. Personally, I believe although there are a lot of tasks to carry on, people do their best to handle most of them. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, in modern life there are a lot of responsibilities for adults and even children. These responsibilities are mandatory and they have to be done, since they have profound impact on people's future. Hence, individuals have no option but doing them. Additionally, ultimate goal of most people is to reach success in their career or education and enhance their life as a result. Therefore, persons make daily plan for their tasks to use their time efficiently and make the best of it. By means of schedule, people can handle abundant of their duties during the day.
Another main reason that is worth mentioning is that not all of the things are needed to be done perfectly. Although perfectionists can accomplish their duties in the best feasible way, they usually encounter with deficiency in time and prolong every little things for a long time. Therefore, from my vintage point, in this rapid and hectic world we live, most people know that they should give priority to doing tasks on time instead of spending a large amount of time and effort on quality level. In this way, we can avoid unnecessary protracting. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I was at my senior year and I had to work on my final thesis. My friend and I started our research almost at the same time. However, he is a perfectionist and he was plodding and spending months on each little detail. Meanwhile, I did the general part of my research and then I focused in important details. Finally, I got graduated last winter while he is still working on his thesis.
In conclusion, I feel people have learnt how to plan for managing plenty of things simultaneously, so they can do different tasks at the same time. Plus, they know that they should sacrifice integrity to meet the deadlines and it is necessary to keep up with the pace of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...world continue to develop, people learn better how to orient themselves with new situa...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...on that is worth mentioning is that not all of the things are needed to be done perfectly....
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: VINTAGE_POINT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'vantage point'?
Suggestion: vantage point
...ngs for a long time. Therefore, from my vintage point, in this rapid and hectic world we live...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, while, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68164432859 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54358974359 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4650650266 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7272727273 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170949807108 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451815343375 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492612396244 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117757590047 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465857172003 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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