Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Due to the progressive advancement of internet, it has been a controversial topic whether the huge information provided by internet is benificial for us. Though some people contend that it may create problem, as far as I am concerned, it is valuable.
First of all, people do more to protect the environment thanks to the information given by the internet. Accessed with the internet, people can share their information in a broader range that more people with similar requirements get aware of. It makes that they can communicate with each others to share the limited resource. For instanse, there some kinds of service providing shared bicycles, cars and even houses, which can reduce the pollution.
Secondly, the studying and working efficiency enhance due to the information from the internet. Nowadays, the traditional ways of learning cannot satisfy the requirement of most people because the huge amount of information happenning throughout the world everday can in some way be correlated with themselves. Therefore, for most of people, the more informative, the more efficiently. Via learning from the internet, merchants can track the movement of their stocks in real time; scholars can download the newest publication; drivers can drive to the destination without being stuck in the traffic jams.
Further, the information given by the internet can bring us safety. Due to the widespread information by the internet, the theives and murders are increasingly harder to escape from the official, which makes us ordinary people live in a safer and confortable environment. For example, some one has uses the fate money without being caught, but the money has been identified. After that, the characteristic of this money can be spread around the country to let everyone know and enable them to protect themselves from the trip.
Grantly, so much information may cause some problems such as the yellow and gulty may lead young people addicted and agressive. However, the positive effects are more than the negitive if we utilze the internet approprately. Basically, we can protect us from being injured by the internet in the following ways: keep distance from the unhealthy website, limit the period of surfing internet, and identify the reality of the information from the internet.
In summary, from what we have discussed, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that it is valuable for as to make use of the information which derives from the internet. If we can appropriately take use of the internet, both our work and life can be better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...related with themselves. Therefore, for most of people, the more informative, the more efficie...
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...d confortable environment. For example, some one has uses the fate money without being c...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, in summary, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18554216867 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8904375307 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527710843373 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6354085432 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.263157895 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218619345683 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075472327048 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583086315296 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125050244891 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652757598704 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.