Life is all about risk. In order to be successful, all successful people took the risk. Throughout history, people argued whether people should take the risk and do new things or do the same thing again and again. In my opinion, successful people should try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
First of all, people should take risks and try to apply for new innovations. From the beginning of the days, our early ancestors tried a lot of things to come at this stage. So, it is our duty to try harder and improve our life and humankind. In most of the workman does, there is a certain risk. For instance, before launching a new drug the pharma company's tries it on animals and other ways. But, they still can not say whether the drug will work or not. So, they have to take the risk and marketize it. However, if the product fails, the company will face a huge loss. But, if it works they can get a lot of profits. So, in this case, they have to take the risk and try.
Secondly, certain professionals have to take risks in order to do their job. Think about the firefighters or professional F1 speed car's racers. These kinds of people take a lot of risks. And, for these kinds of risk, they are respected and honored all around the world. For example, one of my friend's father is a firefighter. He has to take risk and fight on the fire, in order to save others who are burning and dying on the fire. Though his family is always worried about his safety, in the main time they are also proud of him. We, all in the school appreciate him very much. This is same for all the sportsman who takes the risk of injuries. Yet, they are heroes of us and we appreciate them all the time.
Doing the same thing again and again is boring, think about the typist. A typist has to type all day long. he has no challenges in his life. Usually, this kind if life has no value as they are not remembered through history.
In conclusion, taking risks is challenging. One must have enough courage to take risk and successful. But, someone takes the risk and success, then everyone appreciates that person so much.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ist. A typist has to type all day long. he has no challenges in his life. Usually,...
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Line 8, column 161, Rule ID: ANALYSIS_IF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of'?
Suggestion: of
...llenges in his life. Usually, this kind if life has no value as they are not remem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38154613466 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26371562487 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501246882793 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7040337192 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.6774193548 100.406767564 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.935483871 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77419354839 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312853014459 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794191304074 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111123077766 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18742221374 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14678325784 0.0645574589148 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 58.1214874552 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.1575268817 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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