Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well.

Submitted by naziii on Wed, 01/15/2020 - 12:57

Throughout history, people try different things to lead a new discovery or development. it is a heat debated among the academicians whether successful people try new things or only rely on their skills and ability to do them well. The vast majority of people believe that successful people are inclined toward trying a new thing rather than doing prior work well. Though some people hold the opposite view. From my perspective, the former idea is more convincing. In subsequent paragraphs, I will elaborate on my points of view cogently.

The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that taking risks sometimes leads to innovations and expending the work. Hence, successful people effort to do new work to try their chance for developing and enlarging the lucrative. To take a personal experience as an example, if my father had not gotten a loan 10 years ago to buy the factory, he is not able to buy it in this recession of the market and global economy crisis.

Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating in this issue is that it leads in most of the time to benefit enormously and promote their works. Thus, if they did not take risks and try new things, the speed of their progress is very low. The result of the survey on this issue at Sharif University, one of the prestigious universities in my country, revealed that in fact more than 70% of victorious is achieved by taking risks.

Finally, it is an indisputable fact that not only does it help to enhance their work but also it shows, they are more ambitious and unquenchable in comparison to the people that do not dare to take a risk. Also, people who prefer to continue the way of the current life are more satisfied and do not want to undergo the stress and improve.

In brief, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that although it might be accompanied by a high level of worries and stress, the successful persons do it to become prosperous in their field. Consequently, they feel greatly happy after their majestic accomplishment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...to lead a new discovery or development. it is a heat debated among the academician...
^^
Line 1, column 365, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hing rather than doing prior work well. Though some people hold the opposite view. Fro...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, so, thus, well, in brief, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78693181818 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8037052576 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0322916562 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.3125 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339708026112 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107848660164 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105558117374 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173393631553 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886204599246 0.0645574589148 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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