Mowadays, it is commonly accepted that teachers in the past are more respected to regards by people that today. Cotrary, to this popular belefs there are still those who argue that people today people today's are more aware from the importance of education in the society, thus currently teacher known as one of high important jobs in each society. I, to a great extent agree with this idea that teachers in the past were more appreciated and valued by society than they are today.
First and foremost, the number of educated person in the past were not comperable with today's. in the past the population of educated ppeople was very lower today and most percent of the society were included of peole who had not any reading ability or had this ability in the very primery level. Thus, the teachers known as a high perstige person in the society.
On another significant fact that should be taken into the cosideration is that, in the past when most number of people lived in the vilage or small cities. teachers known as high knowledge person at this societies that they not only responsile for student though but they had have very important role in made decision about important happens in the cities. Because they were confidence by people as talented person. And after the churchs they had important value between ppeolpe and their ideas were acceptable and refrence fpr people.
finally, yet importantly, it is true that people know have more knowledge about importance the quality of their children education. But in the past when the societies were not developted like today. And people known teachers as best and only way to recive important jobs and good social leve.
on the bases of reason that mentioned above I am convinced that teachers in the past were more appreciated by peole that they were today. Because of lack in the number of educated peole at this time and the valuable and helpful role of teachers between peole at this time and also, best way to reciving their children to success.
- TPO 25 80
- Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader. 85
- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. 90
- TPO 36 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, still, thus, it is true, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80403458213 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35744382325 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463976945245 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7246937718 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.133333333 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252992373533 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113734157425 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110335056358 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153874479984 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382253741693 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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