It is irrefutable that teachers play crucial role during people's growth and the occupation of teaching knowledge has always been respected all over the society. But controversy emerges that whether teachers were more appreciated and respected during the past years than current days. Some people claim that teaching jobs have always been gaining people's respect and it is actually necessary and indispensable in our society. While this statement has been torn to pieces by others, who hold the point that teachers indeed have important status but it isn't as important as previous. As far as I am concerned, due to two main reasons, the social status of teachers are declining.
On top of that, people with knowledge are not as rare as previous. With the development of education and govement's emphasis on the area of education, more and more people have access to advanced education, not to say people with high school background. It was the scarcity of knowledgible people that caused the high social status of teachers in the past, which is not the same in modern society. I'll take my parents story as an example. During their days, there was usally only one teacher in a village and parents often gave their children's teacher food, like rice and meat, as a gift to ask the teacher to better look care of their kids. But these days, it is not a phenomenon anymore, because this kind of bribing is fobidden in school.
Besides, news about certain teachers failing to take their responsibility has been common these days. For instance, Some teachers abuse their right as teacher to hit the students, which has left students with shadows in their mind. Some teachers even refuse to teach kids with less talent but only care about those gifted students, because they lack the basic patience. All of those bad news has been reported frequently and leave the whole society nothing but an bad impression of teachers and it also leads to the decline of teachers' status.
In a word, teachers are not respected and valued as they were in the past because they are not still scarce resources anymore and some inqualified teachers' behaviors also contribute to this consequence.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 93
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, if, look, so, still, while, for instance, kind of, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91553133515 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52899790321 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517711171662 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7740420752 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179321034329 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606929990833 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610273840958 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124073432709 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392447715304 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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