Teaching activity has been respected over the many decades by all persons in the world regardless of any culture or religious view. People have believed teachers are the most important segments in society because they make their children’s character and behavior. However many statements say in recent years this valued task has not been paid attention like past which I agree with that and explain my opinion in following.
First of all,we can discern that digital revolution took over the teaching field. With the advent of computer technology and the internet, videos became the new source of learning for students all over the world. Similarly, books i.e., hard copies transformed into e-books and school bags took the shape of rectangular electronic devices like iPad's, etc. Previously, teachers took the responsibility of inculcating the knowledge in the students. Even some people had been grateful to few teachers who have been important in their culmination. But this has changed in such a way that children are altogether avoid this form of education, by learning themselves from online videos. This obliterates the interaction between the student and the teacher.
In the same way, a student might not acquire exposure from teachers' perspectives as well as important cues from their life experiences. This situation has become so dire that online education has become the most preferable form of education by the people, according to the survey conducted by Education For All Association in January, 2019. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. During the last summer, I had visited my relatives' house. In a small conversation that I had with my nephew, he totally convinced me that online education is better than the conventional form of teaching. Only thing that an educational institution can offer is proper certification or degree to the student, not to mention his conduct. Nonetheless, online educating schools have come up with an standard to provide degree which are valid elsewhere.
Secondly, apart from the evolution of education methods into digital form, there is lot to concern about teachers' value in the society. Evidently there has been a reduction in consideration of teachers, by the students. Students in various universities bunk the classes as they prefer to study them online, sitting in their dormitories. Due to this reason, there had been steady decline in students taking part in teaching field and this will be harrowing if the current trend continues, substantially, as lot of students prefer to work in digital world, dream on opening startups etc.,
In conclusion, teaching field is facing a alarming decline but this might be a huge loss for the future generations. Teachers should become part of one's upbringing as their experiences help students in a lot of ways. Although it is much convenient to learn staying at home, but interaction with teachers might really help to succeed in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nonetheless, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, apart from, even so, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2494.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23949579832 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87550636002 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563025210084 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8003370825 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.434782609 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6956521739 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69565217391 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998330942822 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298392479461 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310970782501 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610370499669 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323055260416 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 86.8835125448 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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