Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A glance at people attitude toward friendship brings to the light a question that has provoked a debate several times, namely, whether a long term friendship with small number of people is more valuable or short term with many new friends. In my opinion, who is in third decade of her life, the value of a relationship is like wine that after longer time tastes better. When people are younger, they do not understand how hard it is to keep good people and they try to expand their relationship and enjoy their time, but after some years, it will be obvious that keeping your close friends is art.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that we are not able to understand a person for few months and just after hardships individuals show their real personality. Some may hide their intentions and be with us for some advantages but after difficulties they run away. After each problem in our life, we see that only limited persons try to help us and those are true friends. Therefore, ability to keep small group of people who are trustable is very hard and long time is needed to recognize them.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that we do not have time to examine all people around us and we get tired to be with different people who put us in trouble. For example, if a fake friend borrow some money and do not return it, we encounter financial difficulties and cannot trust anybody else. every body has his own stressful situations in work, university and family environment and do not want some body else add to complications. Hence, happiness comes with long period of time friendship.
Admittedly, there are some positive effect of having broad variety of friends. It is really enjoyable to spend your time with cool people when there is free time and do not stay alone. When I was at university, I usually was out every night with my classmates and i have memorable memories in my mind. However, they left me alone when I could not pass my pharmaceutical science course and it showed me that finally I have to solve my issue alone.
Due to aforementioned argument explored in previous statements, I strongly recommend students to keep their close friends even if it is hard to have joyful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, third, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63184079602 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56608890281 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554726368159 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9752133268 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.375 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252005682005 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826397753809 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081616912143 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125112801906 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069952196529 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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