As far as we know that friendships are essential for individual’s happiness. We are all inclined to have old friends, but not everyone gets the ability to make new ones. According to my private experiences, I simply think the ability to make many new friends is much more important than only maintain the old relationships.
First and foremost, the traces of everyone’s growth are totally different. As we are growing up, we easily find that the friendship with friends from our childhood would be looser. It is very obviously as we underwent totally different life, let alone after we entry into the society or organize a family. We have no such enough energy and time to maintain an old relationship by just recalling the memories.
Secondly, our physical location in the world is not fixed always. When you recall your growth and working processes, the most possibility of the trace is much more movable than stable. As to me, I have changed more than 5 cities or even countries for working and living. We could insist on connect mutually but the physical distance will make an obviously impact on the relations. We need new friends to support our new living life.
Last but not the least, everyone is unique with special characters and merits. We can not only stay in the old circle, in that case, we are limited by the lack of new things. We should liberate ourselves from the traditional social circle. More friends bring up more opportunities, also could lead to diversity of our life.
So I think, the ability to gain a totally new friendship is more important than stay still.
- TOEFL T P O 49 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and ex 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n only maintain the old relationships. First and foremost, the traces of everyo...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('obviously') instead an adjective, or a noun ('impact') instead of another adjective.
...lly but the physical distance will make an obviously impact on the relations. We need new friends t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85454545455 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78683089661 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574545454545 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9998558242 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5294117647 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20667131209 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687141013955 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065841082682 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13809006593 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692023192191 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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