Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The government should require all young adults to perform some kind of national service, such as military service or social work.Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
At the turn of the new century, with the development of the human's modern society, more and more people tend to explore new things through the services which they bring to the country. Service has great importance on the quality of one's life in society. Actually, people's attitudes towards this issue are carried from person to person. But I agree with the statement because I would suggest two reasons based on my general facts in addition to my personal experiences to support the arguments.
The first aspect to point out is that many benefits quickly stem from our services in our country. I would like to mention noteworthy research conducted by CSR institute in India. The discovered results suggest that Seventy-Five percent of the young population indulge themselves in wrong activities if they did not present themselves to help their country. For instance, I remember when I was young people after graduate from my university I did not take responsibility in my life, but after finished my obligatory military service I realized the meaning of life and the whole responsibility of my future.
Secondly, social work is a great teacher to build character. I still affirm the same idea because there is no guarantee that social work is omnipresent in our daily life. Admittedly, social work has a close tie-in motivation and creativity. For example, I remember when I was in high school I was shy to participate in school events because I had not a good skill to speak with my team to achieve our goals in School competitions. Therefore, my best friend invited me to be a member in his team and then after finished this event I discovered I learned a lot of things and my friends motivated me to be a creative and overcome the problem of non-interaction with them.
To draw a conclusion, there has been a positive correlation between doing military service or social work and being successful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... has great importance on the quality of ones life in society. Actually, peoples atti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8950617284 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87575493889 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561728395062 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6762448895 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127241783709 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474043229884 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419257593 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897892993212 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374721761183 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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