It is everyone’s moral duty to helping others to have better living. People can donate portion of their money and possessions to charity and the needy. It helps them to feel mentally calm and to live in better society. I strongly believe that it is not necessary that people who have more money dedicate it to charity more. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
I think people who have more money work and try harder than others. They can use their money for other purposes. It is not necessary to give away to charity more. They can establish a business and provide employment opportunities for youngsters. Therefore, they not only earn more profit but also benefit others. For example, my uncle only devotes percentage of their income to helping poor people. He established a big company and employed a lot of young people. Thus, his action is helpful for him and others.
Moreover, i believe that the rich should not assign more money to the poor because it makes poor people become lazy. It prevents them from making efforts to earn money. For instance, I know a family who are poor and a rich man support them. Thus, they do make any attempt to make money, while they have bodily health and can try to find a job. As a result, rich people can assign their extra money to other important purposes.
Finally, in addition to riches should save some money for their future. It is not reasonable that if they have more money, they devote it more. It is possible that they need money at emergency conditions. As an example, my friend’s father was interested in donating more money to poor people. But unfortunately he faced economic problems and had not any saving.
To sum up, in my point of view, rich people should donate part of their money to charity. It is not essential that if they have more money, they give away it more. They should save it for emergency situations and for personal purpose. Sometimes helping poor people prevents them from trying to work.
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- Independent writing task 2 TPO 34 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...pful for him and others. Moreover, i believe that the rich should not assign...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omic problems and had not any saving. To sum up, in my point of view, rich peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72471910112 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4758395734 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474719101124 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.0468570733 48.9658058833 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.2962962963 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1851851852 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92592592593 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381215217358 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119819598225 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131310692336 0.0737576698707 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250751182793 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524236562323 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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