Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by Peyman90 on Wed, 10/05/2016 - 13:51

The quality of education is a very important issue for every college across the world. University administrations try their best to enhance the quality of learning process in order to make a place where knowledge and experience easily are transferred from professors to students. Some universities decide to increase professor's salaries to achieve the goal. In my opinion, I think this is not a wise decision and in the following paragraphs, I will elaborate my explanations.

Firstly, there are other more effective ways to enhance the quality of education in the universities. Additional financial resources could be used to hold more scholarship and grants for talented students in the university. These awards will definitely increase the competition between students to learn as much as possible when they attend the class. For example, universities can hold an award for the best term paper for each course they attend. In this way, the students will try to work hard in order to win the prize. Besides, the money could be utilized to bring additional facilities and experimental apparatus to the university laboratories. The laboratory with many devices and apparatus brings additional opportunity for students who want do a research experimentally. These research work in return will lead to the graduation of more qualified students which is representative of the high-quality education.

Furthermore, the universities should try to encourage their professors to compete for external funded projects to be carried out in the college. The funded projects would be great opportunity for the professors to build the facility and also conduct the cutting-edge research which is ann important factor for preparing the students for the job market. In addition, these funded projects can bring a reputation to the university for being an in close relationship with industry. The students will be benefited from theses cooperation by finding more opportunity to do internships in industry.
Lats but not least, the university with professors who earn so much money every month will bring a sense of inequality for other individuals in the college. For example, the research staff in the university will be disappointed with seeing the difference between salary he owns with professors. Maybe the laboratory technician also be less encouraged to do well in the lab while seeing a huge gap between technician's salary with professor's one. The sense of inequality may bring negative effect to the education of students since every person should be motivated to do his responsibilities if the university tries to be best in student’s education .

To put in a nutshell, I believe increasing salaries of university professors will not lead to enhance the quality of education. There are other ways to reach this goal rather than decision this one.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in my opinion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272540983607 0.229887763892 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.147540983607 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0799180327869 0.0866891130778 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0368852459016 0.046263068375 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0225409836066 0.0685040099705 33% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120901639344 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.030737704918 0.0351676179071 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.13946939948 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0532786885246 0.0309702414327 172% => OK
Particles: 0.00204918032787 0.00188951952338 108% => OK
Determiners: 0.125 0.0887237588012 141% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0327868852459 0.0209618222197 156% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0122950819672 0.0139019557991 88% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2854.0 2387.08602151 120% => OK
No of words: 452.0 408.028673835 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.31415929204 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37389380531 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314159292035 0.251872472559 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.267699115044 0.174417080927 153% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.190265486726 0.112833075102 169% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13946939948 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469026548673 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.3664300699 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5454545455 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6338657493 48.84282405 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.727272727 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.681818181818 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 51.961383749 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 2.0495049505 1.45489161554 141% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42450738885 0.300154397459 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115877737793 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0781113716068 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.56680719482 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.103962248661 0.151897553556 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191080256516 0.114077575197 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677675396882 0.0781384742642 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.489397991476 0.336927656856 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.120050907144 0.067059652881 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312046905686 0.210909579961 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388792267163 0.0618886996521 63% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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