Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
Throughout history, in all civilized societies, the issue of professors' wage engendered copious controversies among universities. Some people may hold the view that universities should enhance professors' salaries. However, some other may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that universities should spend more money on building more facilities. As far as I am concerned, for increasing the quality of education, universities should enhance professors fee because not only can they better concentrate on their teaching job, but also it inspire them to working hard.
The first aspect to point out is that professor can concentrate on their teaching job. Nowadays, development of the technology happening in a very fast pace and this changes cause the price of materials increase. Therefore many people are oblige to have another job like professors. For instance, my friend has a professor in civil engineering department that have a arduous life. He have to work in his taxi to obtain more money because he did not earn much money form his teaching work in university. Hence, instead of focusing in his job, he was forced to do another job. Also, these job consume all his energy and in the class he was very tired and this effect on his teaching and learning of his students and it is obvious the quality of the education decreases.
A further more subtle point is that increasing the salaries of professor, motivate them to work harder. Moreover, they try to to earn more money by publishing articles and gain fame. for example, one of my professor in universities were very famous and he was well-known in other country. Since, first time he start his work, he focus on scientific discoveries and publishing magazine and today he half the the year going abroad to teach in foreign universities. Also, many clever people leave their education because they know that the can not make money of it. Furthermore, by changing this fact universities can hire astute students and professors to improve their quality.
To make a long story short, base on the aforementioned argument, due to inspire professor to work more efficient and they focus on their work, universities should enhance professors wages. Consequently, it is highly recommended that universities and collage spend more money on salaries of their professor to enrich the quality of education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 539, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'inspires'?
Suggestion: inspires
...rate on their teaching job, but also it inspire them to working hard. The first aspect...
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Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... cause the price of materials increase. Therefore many people are oblige to have another ...
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Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... civil engineering department that have a arduous life. He have to work in his ta...
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Line 2, column 384, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...department that have a arduous life. He have to work in his taxi to obtain more mone...
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Line 2, column 465, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...oney because he did not earn much money form his teaching work in university. Hence,...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...them to work harder. Moreover, they try to to earn more money by publishing articles ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'starts'.
Suggestion: starts
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'focuses', 'focusses'.
Suggestion: focuses; focusses
...Since, first time he start his work, he focus on scientific discoveries and publishin...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...d publishing magazine and today he half the the year going abroad to teach in foreign u...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...d publishing magazine and today he half the the year going abroad to teach in foreign u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13246753247 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90084638779 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.536020258 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2631578947 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225196043929 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771143976796 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790220049955 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164455886856 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725633802765 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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