TPO 12 - It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
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The first reason worth mentioning is that a person who has a vast academic knowledge has a better chance to progress in these days. Nowadays, development of the technology alters roles of people and connected all areas together. The link between areas is the new form of jobs. There are many new skill that we can use its application in all area. Therefore, it is necessary for us to have a broad academic knowledge for using this application. For example, there are many data collected by humans today. Skilled people can use new method on this collected data and gain valuable information from them. Also, these data help us to make a better prediction. These method that we use them on data is the process of data or a data scientist job. It require many different area like statistics, math, computer science and based its application other area. The use of method increased in the past years and all company need them. So, a person have a basic knowledge of different science can use these method and progress faster than other people.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. 90
- TPO 14 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. 70
- Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well 70
- In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[6]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'vast academic knowledge'.
Suggestion: vast academic knowledge
...rth mentioning is that a person who has a vast academic knowledge has a better chance to progress in thes...
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Line 1, column 390, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[6]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'broad academic knowledge'.
Suggestion: broad academic knowledge
...erefore, it is necessary for us to have a broad academic knowledge for using this application. For example...
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Line 1, column 657, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this method' or 'These methods'?
Suggestion: This method; These methods
...ta help us to make a better prediction. These method that we use them on data is the process...
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Line 1, column 746, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
Suggestion: requires
...ess of data or a data scientist job. It require many different area like statistics, ma...
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Line 1, column 754, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ata or a data scientist job. It require many different area like statistics, math, computer sc...
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Line 1, column 990, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this method' or 'these methods'?
Suggestion: this method; these methods
... knowledge of different science can use these method and progress faster than other people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 182.0 407.700716846 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71978021978 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.48103885553 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55135041942 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 212.727598566 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554945054945 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 618.680645161 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0902537519 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.5833333333 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108534669676 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425933936474 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474031393614 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108534669676 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.