Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Universities should give the same amount of money to their student’s sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Most people agree with this concept that universities should fund on libraries more than sport’s activities.In my opinion access to the librarian refrence is enormously important to both collegian and society as a whole. I feel this way for two reasons , which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, appropriation budget to libraries is one of the great duty of universities due to they need to keep updating on their books. If university do not spend money on their library, students get in trouble to reach some refrences and do not complete their assign at time.My own experience shows this, previous semester i searched for reprint biology book and I could not find it anywhere. As a result, i emailed to my professor and explained my problem to him and he introduced me another teacher to borrow me that book. I am convinced that our library is so poor in new edition and our source is extremely old.
Secondly,people attend university to learn and educate in their favourit fields not to play. They contribute in heavy exams and try for it several month to achieve best degree and provide better future for themselves. They do not expect entering university for play due to there is a place for investigating. I have experience about this problem that I touch it with my own.When my little sister entered to big and famous university , she encountered surprisingly events. Every thing was so different to her vision.Lack of equipments were felt seriously.She and her friends complained to chancellor and they made committee for inquiry to this demand. As a result, during several session faculty ordain rules for parts of money and they decided to dedicate most of budget for researching project and completed source of library.
In other hands, prices of books are high and facility of buying every books for everyone is rare.But, attending sport clubs is cheap and it is possible for all to participate in by own. So, that is need to spend money on parts of that is impossible for all students. For example, cost of one of our book related to my field is 50-60$ whiles cost of gym club for a month is 20$. This example shows, the importance of cost management.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that investment on improve librarian tasks can affects whole of society by growing educated students and increase rank of university by update knowledge of it’s members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91911764706 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84047821296 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.537338001 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.058823529 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183879960329 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603928606373 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542361689292 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106223152706 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493743016053 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.