Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail，they will produce better work for the project. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail，they will produce better work for the project.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

When working with classmates or colleagues, I believe it's better to communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail. Communication in person can definitely produce better work for the project, because it saves us a lot of trouble on getting advices and assistance, as well as beating procrastination.

It's more convenience to discuss about the project in person. When we discuss about a issue in persone, we are fully involved and speaking out our ideas timely. Some ideas may spark right in the middle of the conversation, and it is efficient to check it out with our teammates.

Assistance in person is more helpful. It is common that we are encountered with difficulties during our tasks, and solving these problems can be extremely crucial to the entire project. When faced with a tough problem that I cannot solve on my own, I can ask for help form my partner. He can get comprehensive information of the circumstances if I'm working with my partner in person. Otherwise I may have to discribe the complex situation to him, and this may takes too long.

Efficiency can be enhanced by communicating in person.

team procrastination

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...roject in person. When we discuss about a issue in persone, we are fully involved...
^
Line 9, column 269, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...not solve on my own, I can ask for help form my partner. He can get comprehensive in...
^^^^
Line 9, column 347, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ive information of the circumstances if Im working with my partner in person. Othe...
^^
Line 9, column 385, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...f Im working with my partner in person. Otherwise I may have to discribe the complex situ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Team
...anced by communicating in person. team procrastination
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 1977.66487455 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 194.0 407.700716846 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0412371134 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10926877955 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 618.680645161 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6147085861 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264452278426 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991461585553 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109676100011 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133452484876 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127042748802 0.0645574589148 197% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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