Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communitie.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Time flows, generations replace each other and people continue live their lives as they want to. Personally, I believe that by the time pass human qualities did not changed much. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, nowadays society still values such quality as helpfulness. Parents try to bring up the best human characteristics in their children as did their, so they develop their mentality and understanding of the importance of interaction with surrounding did not lost its place. For instance, youths are active participants of different public activities and events. They even gather with groups to take part and usually activities in which they get involved are directed to help orphanages or people in need.
Secondly, young adults from participant become organizers of these kinds of events. They earn experience from participation and then start own projects. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Two years ago I get involved into volunteering with my friends. It was just help in organization of sport events, but further I took part in many other events with different purposes. Ones were directed to make environment cleaner and greener, second to maintain species of endangered animals and others to help people in need. After plethora of activities I have got an idea to start own project, so now it is progress, but I am planning to start it in the beginning of next year.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that people nowadays are not less involved and not interested, but are willing and acting for the sake of community. This is because parents brought up appropriate qualities of complete member of society, and youth understand the importance of help and interaction with community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
...y the time pass human qualities did not changed much. I feel this way for two reasons w...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...of interaction with surrounding did not lost its place. For instance, youths are act...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07482993197 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89713667226 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8133469961 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.25 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144536158171 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427495820606 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252261258602 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873698487995 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150675846749 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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