Do you agree or disagree with the following statment?
to improve the quality of education,universities should spend money on salaries of university professors.
High education is the most important step towards the professional life. the students spend a long time looking and choosing the university that they want to attend, also, they are looking for the university with a good education quality, good professor reputation and rich social life, because the quality of education they received may determine their opportunity to get a job in the future. It is true that the professors are the fundamental part of the education process, but in my point of view I think it is important for the university to spend money in a lot of other things to improve the education quality, they don't have to spend more money for the professor's salary.
The university administration has to spend more money on the university's facilities, such as library, that in turn may lead to improving the information that the students gets from the books in the library, according to a recent newspaper, the improving of the library services led to increase the student grades in the test by 30%. If the university just focuses on the professor's salary, that may lead to improving the education quality to some extent, but in addition to that, they have to focus on other things to help the students and the professors to be more effective. Each university has to spend their money wisely in a way make them getting a good outcome.
A lot of universities now a day spend more money on the research, all the world today pays a special attention to the research, by doing that they make a free advertising for their university, also, all the society looks to this university with a great respect and the whole people have the idea, which is practically true, that the university with a good research team, for sure they have a high education quality. If the university spends their money only to get a new professor with a high salary, they may get little benefits than if they invest this money in a research. the university administration has to put priority about where they have to spend their money depending on the benefits they gain.
In conclusion, the education quality is so important to improve, so, each university have to spend their funds on different things, besides, the focusing on one thing, as increasing professors salary, may not be helpful as a lot of people think. that mean, they have to try a lot of approaches to get the improvement they need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, so, as to, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75180722892 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75784579994 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426506024096 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.172563355 48.9658058833 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.272727273 100.406767564 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.7272727273 20.6045352989 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245175885263 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118328916909 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548334345625 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171682103434 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480757668452 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 11.7677419355 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 58.1214874552 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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