In the last few decades, with the development of technology and science, the internet has become a substantial part of humankind. Internet acts as a bridge and fills the gap between countries and cultures whereby people feel closer to each other. In this regard, some people think that government should provide internet access free of cost so that every citizen gets the opportunity to use it. While others hold a different opinion that it is not a wise idea to provide internet free of cost. From my perspective, the former view contains more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
Primarily the first reason that makes me hold the belief that life would be much easier and simpler after having a free internet connection. Also, it motivates children and young crowds to acquire their tasks. To shed light on it, children would get an opportunity to take distance learning courses. Additionally, in this pandemic, mostly all schools provide online education to their students. Moreover, people do not need to go to the workplace instead they can finish their office work online by sitting at home. Hence, people would need an internet connection in order to acquire all these tasks, and they would face many difficulties by not having free internet connections.
Another equally noteworthy reason to bear in mind is that needless to say, it is hard for the government to provide free internet service to each and every individual since it is a cost-effective idea, and the government is not capable enough to bear a huge finance load. However, providing free internet will be beneficial for the government because the government can make a large revenue from the online market. To be more specific, nowadays, online shopping has become one of the most popular platforms where people tend to purchase almost everything from online stores and websites. consequently, it helps the government to earn a lot of profit. Therefore, arranging free internet connections would be beneficial for both governments as well as the local public.
Lastly, having discussed the issue from this point of view, I rather look at it from another standpoint. Admittedly, there are evident benefits of having free internet, however, it could have some negative effects on the community as well. Internet addiction is a growing problem everywhere since children might get addicted to playing online games and watching their favorite shows on the internet. Additionally, some adults try to access some appropriate sexual websites available on different websites. hence, having free internet might negatively affect children’s and young ones’ life.
All in all, contemplating all remarks, I strongly believe that government should provide internet at free of cost to everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...citizen gets the opportunity to use it. While others hold a different opinion that it...
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Suggestion: Consequently
...ything from online stores and websites. consequently, it helps the government to earn a lot ...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ould be beneficial for both governments as well as the local public. Lastly, having dis...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...bsites available on different websites. hence, having free internet might negatively ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2352.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23830734967 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77361997989 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543429844098 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8446460233 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.260869565 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5217391304 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73913043478 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218362851785 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605341258109 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589725363776 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13235258943 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065855267364 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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