Do you agree or disagree:
It is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you are younger rather
than when you are older.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling around is a good way to relax and expand your mind. People will enjoy different sceneries and meet something new that are not familiar with. Unfortunately, the time and energy of one person is limited. So, which stage of lives to fulfill the travel plan is better, the younger or the older? From my perspective, I agree with that visiting different countries when you are younger is more beneficial.
Admittedly, there is no doubt that the time for traveling will be more sufficient when people get older, especially for people who have already retired. They can go anywhere at anytime without worrying about whether will delay the work and school curriculum or not. There is no need to go sightseeing in a hurry. If tired, slow down and fully enjoy the view; if suddenly interested in another countries, fly to that place immediately instead of being bound to job or academic assignments. Traveling around when you are older means more flexible time to spend on journey than when you are younger.
However, energy also plays an important role in traveling plan and absolutely young people are more powerful than the older. And they are less easily to get sick when visit to other countries where the climate is different from homeland. From my own experience for example, I went to travel with my grandparents last winter. We decided to go to Russia and as you know, Russia is extremely cold and the snow is sick in winter. Though the landscape was wonderful and local people were full of enthusiasm, we still left there quickly and came back to China since my grandpa caught a cold. It is dangerous to get sick while traveling in other countries and at least it will affect the mood.
Furthermore, there is no better approach for young people to broaden their horizon and enjoy exotic culture than traveling abroad. In the age of globalization, the younger generation is supposed to realize what is going on in other countries instead of only focusing on own country. They are willing to feel something through traveling that maybe come into handy in their future. The experience from tasting food they eat during journey lets them come up with the ideal of being a chef; the experience from seeing an unique architecture that they have never seen before help them burst into architectural inspiration; the experience from music played by foreigners makes them interests in acquiring musical knowledge. For young people, they have more opportunity and possibility to change their lives rather than older people, and traveling abroad can offer this kind of chance.
To put it in a nutshell, although traveling abroad when you get order can control the time freely, it brings more advantages when you are younger. Sufficient energy and the chance to open mind is of important for people to start a journey. That is why I said traveling abroad when you are younger is better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 515, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, thus, while, at least, for example, kind of, no doubt, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2407.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 492.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89227642276 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60110751312 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516260162602 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7013221235 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.291666667 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314536941055 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992511832447 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125680316049 0.0737576698707 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208960738692 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956390304321 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.