Honest has a prevailing role in every individual's life. The inevitable question which has always caused debate among people is whether individuals always should under any circumstances telling truth or not. Although some might maintain that in a friendship relationship, we should say everything totally, I firmly contend that is implausible. I n the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most important reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that all of people in their life have secret that tend to hide from their friends. Because if that secret issues be revealed it is possible that friendship among them get destroyed. Take myself as an example, when I was at high school I missed one of my close friend because he noticed that I had difficulty in communicating with others and this matter caused she removed me from her social circle while I was a introverted girl that later could interact with people positively . Therefore,
Second, people can solve sophisticated problem by themselves in most cases and there is no need to share with others. In other words, telling truth thoroughly to our friends is not necessary because it is possible they not only do not have any practical solution but also ridicule us. Take myself as an example again, my sister suffer from lacking money in university and asked her friend assist her because she was in tough budget but she not only help her but also ridicule her too.
In conclusion, I strongly believed that it is not essential being honest in every situation because of destroying our friendship and having ability to solving problems by ourselves. It is recommended that for a stable friendship do not demonstrate all of material with our friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in most cases, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00346020761 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79709378649 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608996539792 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1277246217 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132806693261 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499922608983 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409675562175 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837578035997 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432104726304 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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