These days learning a foreign language has a vital role in our lives. Some people think learning a language is efficient only for travel and work in an abroad and some disagree. In my view, reasons that people should learn a foreign language is beyond the travel and work. that is related to better community and job opportunity I will explore the reasons why I feel this way in the following essay.
First, learning a foreign language cause our community has developed. For example, when I was a university student, I had many problems in my thesis master because I could not read most of the article. That put me on the difficult situation after that I decided working hard that solved that staple issue. Moreover, I could find the professors from other country and easily communicate with them that without language never happened. Not only I progressed my flow in language but also could familiar with the educated individual all over the world.
Second, provide us more job opportunity. Nowadays learning at least one language particularly English is essential for all of the university students as the world is more modern. Take myself as an example again, because of my strong English language, I employed in an international company which the most important part of the employment condition was speaking English fluently. I could do any work such as email report of the result to other company, translated academic articles, participate in foreign countries. This example demonstrates how important learning another language.
In conclusion, I disagree with this statement that learning a foreign language only suitable for travel or work in an abroad. I think that is appropriate for developed our teamwork and make career opportunity better.
- TOEFL T P O 49 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Describe an object that is very special in your life Explain why this object is important to you Include details and examples in your explanation 55
- One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job. 60
- TOEFL T P O 49 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TPO-44 - Independent Writing Task Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing th 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
These days learning a foreign language h...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...language is beyond the travel and work. that is related to better community and job ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to better community and job opportunity I will explore the reasons why I feel th...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eel this way in the following essay. First, learning a foreign language cause...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cated individual all over the world. Second, provide us more job opportunity....
^^^^^
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e particularly English is essential for all of the university students as the world is mor...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...portant learning another language. In conclusion, I disagree with this stat...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 121, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...age only suitable for travel or work in an abroad. I think that is appropriate for develo...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, at least, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12152777778 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78729056886 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6194535049 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1875 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35614428565 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120081685545 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120756993528 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230221327972 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140056372083 0.0645574589148 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.