It is obvious that in today's fast-paced word not only family members but also governments play a crucial role in everyone's daily life. It is true that in some cases, people can solve their problems by themselves or with the help of their families; however, it is possible that people face many obstacles in their lives so that they are not able to overcome these difficult situations without the help of governments. Therefore, I strongly believe that it is essential that governments should be involved in assisting people to figure out their problems. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
To begin with, sometimes people encounter problems which only governments have capability to solve them. In other words, these problems are resulted from the lack of facilities in society including education, health care system, environmental pollution, and so on. In fact, individuals are suffering from difficult situations which they need the help of the governments to improve. For example, my father suffers from cancer; but unfortunately there is not a well-equipped hospital in my city to treat this disease. Therefore, we have to take him to capital to treatment. Also, this problem exists in other cities and people have to take their patients who have serious diseases to capital to treat. The government should assign enough budgets to equipping hospitals in smaller cities.
Secondly, many people are trying to work hard in order to achieve their goals in their lives. In spite of the fact that they make a lot of effort to solve their problems to fulfill their objectives, there are obstructions in their life which cannot be resolved without the aid of the governments. For instance, in my country, there are a lot of juveniles who study various majors in universities and have enough knowledge and skills to enter job market. But, there is not sufficient job positions for them and most of them suffer from unemployment. As a result, they cannot solve this problem alone or even with the help of their families. The government should adopt policy to overcome this difficult situation. They should provide an opportunity for people to be creative and establish their own businesses.
To sum up, according to the points and examples mentioned above, it is necessary for government to be involved in helping people to solve their problems.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement, playing sports teaches peoplemore lessons about life. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is a waste of money for government to fund space travel or space exploration. Give specific examples and details to support your answer. 73
- In order to stay healthy, many people choose to exercise. Some people tend to exercise individually such as running and riding bicycles, etc. Some people tend to participate in group exercises such as team sports. Which one do you prefer and why? 70
- It’s difficult for teachers to be both popular (well liked) and effective in helping students learn. Agree or disagree? 66
- Do you agree or disagree? People meet any problems in their daily life and they can solve them by themselves or with the help of their families, so the help from the government is not necessary. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...helping people to solve their problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, in other words, in some cases, in spite of, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08375634518 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79385370807 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515228426396 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7821374576 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.421052632 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1052631579 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420952985647 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12073696129 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109123218921 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267334115347 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746852594429 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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