Friendship is a major part in everyone’s life. But the question of whether the capability to maintain one with limited people is most important or the ability to make new friends is most essential has led to a discussion. I personally believe that the latter one is more important for the following reasons.
First, the ability of making new friends is very useful for maintaining a never-ending enrichment of your life. Sometimes, as people move on with their own life, many friends get separated physically, like the moving to an upper grade, or the going to different universities. If you cannot make friends quickly and easily in a new environment, you will get isolated from other people. And because friendship is a fundamental relationship to filling your daily life with joy, you will feel lonely and dull, or sometimes even misery and despair in hard times. However, if you can fill your life with friends promptly, you will continue to have an enjoyable life. For example, my elementary classmate Paul was a shy person. He didn’t like to talk to people voluntarily, so he had no friends at all. He always walked alone and ate alone with all the other children having fun without him and nobody caring about him. He gradually became very lonely and even a little emotional when people talked to him. So the importance of the ability to make friends quickly and easily comes clearly to the mind with this example.
Second, by making new friends quickly, people can obtain many new and various ideas of issues and statements efficiently. There are a thousand hamlets in a thousand people’s eyes, every one has his or her thoughts and perspectives. By becoming friends with new people, we can learn additional understandings of a certain subject as we talk and chat. This way we can enrich our horizon and broaden our minds to a more comprehensive thinking, which also enables us to absorb additional knowledge. I, for instance, has made a lot of friends since entering middle school and I’m still acquainting a lot of students from many different classes. Recently, Russia and Ukraine are at war. And among my big friend circle, we are having a fierce discussion over the situation, a huge income of news and a wide share of data and information. Some believe that the war will end quickly because they believe in Russia’s military forces’ capability, whereas others think that Ukraine will eventually recover and the situation might become a multi-country war. I learned a lot and discovered some astonishing ideas, which made me very fascinated. Thus, the ability to make friends is crucial to the enrichment of your mind, too.
In conclusion, based on the reasons above, named, enriching people’s lives and enabling the acquisition of knowledge, I believe that the ability of making new friends quickly is a crucial and basic skill in the building of friendship and the fulfilment of life.
- TPO44 Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related 79
- do you agree or disagree with the statement the ability to maintain friendship with small group of people is more important than ability to making new friends 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...is a major part in everyone’s life. But the question of whether the capability to maintain one with lim...
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Line 3, column 896, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cares'.
Suggestion: cares
...ldren having fun without him and nobody caring about him. He gradually became very lon...
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Line 3, column 914, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ithout him and nobody caring about him. He gradually became very lonely and even a...
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Line 5, column 617, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...till acquainting a lot of students from many different classes. Recently, Russia and Ukraine a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2434.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95723014257 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80982604199 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531568228106 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1130113626 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.416666667 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4583333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339908351838 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926760269285 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083910371401 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223884632165 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620089475738 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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