Do you agree or disagree with the statement that government should do to improve the health care to clean the environment?
The government should be responsible to provide its citizens shelter, education facility and work. Among all these responsibilities, a government should also put efforts to upgrade the healthcare. I believe that government should clean environment to improve public health. I will elaborate my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, water is the main source for spreading disease in communities. So, government should start with cleaning water to prevent outbreak of water related diseases in communities. For that government should create an organization which monitor purity of water. Because water in not just used for drinking purpose but also being used for cooking, washing clothes, etc. Nowadays, clean air is also a problem that needs a solution to prevent many airborne diseases. Today, we see industries all over the places. They are not properly discarding their waste and releases poisonous gasses in the air. All industries produce different type of waste which also requires different methods for permanent disposal. Government should regulate those industries which possess an important influence on public health.
Second, cleaning the environment is not enough but government should also create awareness in public about benefits of clean environment. Changing environment cannot be done in a single day. Government should create a plan that sustain for many years which also takes many hands to succeed. In recent years, New Delhi has so much air pollution and because of that road traffic accidents have also increased. To overcome this problem, people started carpooling to reduce traffic and air pollution in the city. Moreover, cleaning environment is not only government’s responsibility, but people should also participate in this action. If all citizens start growing trees, then it would help to reduce energy consumption and air pollution. All those effort put huge impact in protecting environment.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that government should create clean and healthy environment first to prevent public health. It will save millions of dollars of government annually which they otherwise spend on treatment and buying costly equipment for the hospitals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 746, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this effort' or 'those efforts'?
Suggestion: this effort; those efforts
...ergy consumption and air pollution. All those effort put huge impact in protecting environme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.0752688172 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61791044776 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93705556446 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555223880597 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0600585967 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.8260869565 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5652173913 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73913043478 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212408204975 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719834879329 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927124708012 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157428288682 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463559957928 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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