Do you agree or disagree with statement:
At universities & colleges, sports & social activities are important as classes & libraries & should receive equal financial support. use reasons & examples to explain it.
For many students sports and social activities are essential aspects for choosing universities. I strongly agree with the statement which states that sports and social activities are important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First, sports and social activities help students to remove stress and feel relax through sport club. For example, when I was in the college, I used to play volleyball in a team with group of students which then became friends with me and helped me to get familiar with the environment specially as I was international student. Also, social activities help the student to learn how to communicate with each other and how to cooperate in relationships with friends.
Second, sports and social activities are important for physical and psychological health of the student. I used to play exercise one hour every day before the classes or whenever I had time. That made me feel relax and enter the exam with full energy. Also, exercise helped me to be happy and healthy. Moreover, social activity increase the educational efficiency of students. It has positive impact on education by making study groups, motivate each other, and help to figure out the difficult issues.
In conclusion, it is essential to pay equal attention classes as well as sports and social activities because it helps the students to feel relax and healthy and should give enough financial support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 249.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13654618474 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71889033234 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546184738956 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1639666102 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3846153846 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186195218353 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771841872804 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852982022695 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134126162779 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521726316378 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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