Do you agree or disagree: young people should try many different kinds of jobs or career before they decide the long term career of their life.
Seeking for different kinds of jobs for young fellows are like using varieties of colorful brushes for painting. As you could imagine, life originally is like a white paper but with the decoration of colors it turns out to be meaningful and wonderful. Young people should try many different kinds of jobs before they decide the long term career of their life, then finally a fascinating picture can be settled down.
Firstly, young people seeking different jobs can help themselves broaden views, gather experience and build a solid foundation for the future. Luckily, I could make myself as an example since recently I been finished my placement as an engineering intern in a company. Describing myself with the fact that even though it’s my third year in university but I actually started getting in touch with engineering software that I would never learn during uni period. Those skills which performed by seniors did actually broad my views, like how to drawing graphs to represent a construction site, as well as calculating fees by using a variety of software. Me fortunately could watch and gather a lot experience on how to implement a small project by using techniques I’ve been taught. Which I think this life career experience would dramatically help my future understanding of different jobs since I have built a solid foundation for myself. So much more does young people who seeking for many jobs.
Secondly, continue kind of sharing my internship experience, during those 30 days of my internship I was able to make several friends. These friends I made when we were made as a team and assigned to proceed a small project, communication went very well between everyone, happily and positively sharing ideas. I was like a lying lion before this taken place of internship I could never get chance to talk to strangers such more frequently, now I was awake and roaring out loudly about my ideas to others and earn definitely worth a respect. Therefore, if young people decide to try many jobs they are absolutely able to know more friends and earn respect of their ideas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... and wonderful. Young people should try many different kinds of jobs before they decide the lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, well, as to, i think, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95750708215 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7135320646 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57507082153 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.2771647463 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28327889591 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100619474682 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157210814669 0.0737576698707 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21308065357 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151212038058 0.0645574589148 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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