Do you agree or disagree?
Most advertisement make products seem much better that they really are.
Advertisement is one the major techniques which is utilized by companies, in order to augment the rate of their sells. There are various characteristics that these advertisements have to attract more customers. One of these traits that is widely used is the fact that companies try to show their products better than their real quality. I totally agree whit this statement as I always think about the attributes of a good advertisement. The ensuing paragraphs will explored my rationale behind my opinion.
To commence with, people always are fascinated by their visual sense. In this order companies try to attract their customers by showing them what they want to see. All of us often look for the best quality products. And the advertisements are the easiest way to attract us. For instance, when I go shopping with my mother, when she does not know about a specific product, she try to buy the most attractive one that she saw its advertisement on Tv.
Another significant reason that deserves attention is about the competitions which are between companies; they believe that by attracting more customers they can have the rest of the market. Therefore, when some companies try to show their products better than its real value, other firms also do the same thing, in order to compete with those companies. For example, my uncle works in a food industry company. Last year their most powerful rival change their advertisement and announced some dishonest words about their products, after that my uncle’s company also did the same.
Taken all the above factors into consideration, companies try to show their products better in their advertisements not only to attract more customers, but also not to lose the competitions whit their rivals. Hence, it is wiser not to buy different commodities just based on companies advertisements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11551155116 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92550755824 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561056105611 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.1979772535 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128210959425 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416861548127 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337213556454 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859875367714 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137105296459 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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