Do you think when a person come to your city, the person will like or dislike your city?
Every city has its own unique characteristics as well as people of every city love their city. Our city is not exceptional and has some unique features. Though, some people think when a person come to our city dislike about living in our city, in my opinion, living in our city will be liked by person who come to our city for a couple of reasons.
The first reason why I believe when a person come to our city thinks our city is a good place for living because of good weather it has. First, our city has a considerable amount of trees refreshing the weather. In our city beside every street there are trees that cultivated for refreshing the air. Second, our city has many parks including trees and plant that avoid the air to become polluted. For example, bagh baboor is a large place covered by trees and other plant that refresh the air as well as avoid the air to become polluted.
The second reason why I think when a person come to our city will like our living due to many good places our city has. People can go for picnic. Every one love cities that have place to go for picnic and enjoy their life and fortunately our city has. For example, qargha is a good place to go for picnic. Additionally, our city has good places for living. Houses in our city is built with global standards, so when people come to our city they will find our city a good place for living.
On the other hand when a person come to our city dislike our living because of lack of security. First, in our city bomb explosion may occur and when a person come to our city will dislike this situation. For example, last week there was a bomb explosion and killed one foreign citizen. Second, in our city is a considerable amount of rubbery and will be dislike by everyone specially the one who come new to our city.
To sum up, it is recommended that when a person come to our city will like living in our cities due to good weather and good places it has. Also, dislike because of insecurity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...one foreign citizen. Second, in our city is a considerable amount of rubbery and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, well, for example, i think, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36021505376 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23719716654 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.362903225806 0.524837075471 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6883275645 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263799935245 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114490056566 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105024853519 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218630532181 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688578419665 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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