Does luck has anything to do with success?
People try to achieve big goals in their lives. They wish to earn great accomplishments to gather other people’s attention toward themselves. But, sometimes they gain or award something in their life that didn’t expect. So, they connect it to superstitious beliefs like luck. However, I totally disagree with this idea due to many logical reasons.
First, I believe that everything which happened and is happening in life of somebody is a result of their previous actions in this world. So, if you are successful in your current position, it is because of your planning and determination that you put there accordingly.
Another point that makes me look doubtfully to such kind of beliefs is their poor basics and deduction about how luck affects a human’s success. People who suggest that luck may have some sort of influences in our success in career, personal life or so many other issues, present no evidence on how this magical matter alter everything in a way that its ultimate outcome brings us happiness and success in our future life.
Also, some people who have philosophical thoughts or religious beliefs state that luck is part of a person’s destiny that god determined for that human. However, I strongly refute this statement. Because it underestimates god’s power and questions his purpose for creation of humans fundamentally. Therefore, God creates us for a reason that I think it is our development physically and mentally with our own strength.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, i think, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 242.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19008264463 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98565657916 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640495867769 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0466288241 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6153846154 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129685623215 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399909505806 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404310450708 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729150209797 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393336380161 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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