Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support you answer.
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;line-height:107%">Gender Gap
creates Dichotomy <o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%">The
statement posits that boys and girls should attend separate schools. However,
by agreeing with this statement, it will not only deteriorate but rotten the
harmony or congruency of our society. Yes, according to my opinion, it will
create an imbalance to our society by separating the schools of boys and girls
because of the following:-<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%">First, it
leads to gender inequality. For example, if boys and girls were studied
separately, the teachings they receive may be different. Further, this could
lead to ambiguity towards the society because conservatively, girls are taught
to study hard and be less audacious whereas boys are taught to be less poignant
and focus more on muscularity (definition of a Man in the view of orthodox
society). However, if both boys and girls were studied together at the same
school, they will learn to respect each other. So, this could engender gender
equality.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%">Second,
studying separately induces rift in communication. Psychologically, the
attitude of both genders is different. If boys studies in school without girls,
boys communicate well with each other. But, when it comes talking with girls,
they lack speaking due to pre-conceived comfort zone (not inveterate to talking
with girls) and they don’t know how to manage with girls which creates
communication gap. In a technological growing world, the environmental and
social problems are solved by communication. So interaction is a key to solve
problems. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%">That’s why I
disagree with the statement that studying boys and girls in different schools.
If boys and girls attend school together, society will be maintained with no
gender inequality and more advantageous is the safety of girls. Yes safety of
girls, according to research conducted by WHO, the thesis focus on the causes
of least safety of girls. India is ranked 1st for the least safety of girls and
the cause of this problem is lack of communication. From the childhood majority
of girls and boys attended schools separately which is the root cause of the
problem. Men are prone to think lurid thoughts about women, due to lack of
interaction with women since childhood. This would cause sordid action against
women. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%">In summary,
girls and boys must study together. So that our society is excluded from
problems like gender inequality, communication gap and it ensures the safety of
the girls.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 39, column 43, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
...rls, according to research conducted by WHO, the thesis focus on the causes of lea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, whereas, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2944.0 1977.66487455 149% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 7.25123152709 4.8611393121 149% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.59474278102 2.67179642975 359% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507389162562 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 756.9 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.51630824373 125% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.3600565397 48.9658058833 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.947368421 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 42.0 4.53405017921 926% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107948587649 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501047139351 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400009142073 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0434538678771 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763948918737 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 11.7677419355 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 58.1214874552 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 24.77 10.9000537634 227% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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