The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past
We are observing a great difference on people’s behavior in the last decades. Since most of us are still giving the proper attention to our extended family, we are facing a tremendous distance between relatives. Due to many distinct reasons such as, an easier contact with gadgets, a very busy life, or a less importance of being together, people are more far from their cousins, uncles, and grandparents.
Today, we do not have the distance as a problem to be in contact with each other. Even if some traditional people still believe that direct contact is better, youths do not have the same thinking. Sometimes, we use technological advantage as a tool to be direct in touch with someone who we love. Smartphones, Ipads, or face-to-face apps, are the new way that relatives are maintaining their relation and daily basis conversation.
Second, the world’s change also influenced our private lives. It is true that we need to find time for our relationships. But nowadays, humanity is working hard and because of this new workaholic generation, families are getting less together. Additionally, parents have their siblings doing different courses or physical activities during the school free time, restricting the time to be in touch with their relatives.
Third, when people have a spot in their professional life, they prefer to be alone. This kind of behavior is very hard to explain or understand, but it is happening in the modern society. Honestly, spending time with a big family is one of the best things that we can do. Unfortunately, this comportamental changing is forcing us to have smaller families than we had in the past.
To conclude, human being behavior changed a lot in the last years. People are giving less importance to relatives that not live with them. Making their relationship frail, cousins, aunts, or grandparents are just having contact with each other by gadgets. Sometimes, they can be without seeing each other for many years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, if, second, so, still, third, kind of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06748466258 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8852754866 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2680846092 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9473684211 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.08540779763 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276174547093 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424957707588 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514861394674 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297259552407 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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