In this fast growing world, industrialization and educational advancement have taken a major role. Considering learning plays a significant role in our life so, everyone has to put the effort to raise the standard educational system. As far as I concerned, I strongly support the idea about building a new high school in my community due to two main reasons I will explain in this essay.
To begin with, population's ratio increased drastically. We need a new high school to be built for getting the advantages of that. Many employees seeking the opportunity to get their lovely career and I believe teachers will obtain the chance to teach in new high school in my community rather than teaching abroad. Consequently, more employees will have a chance to work as a teachers, administrative, or even front desk workers. For instance, the community that I used to live in, we are having just one high school besides, I met vast of teachers and professors seeking jobs abroad or to the cities closest to mine. That affect the economic and educational levels of our community. This will enhance individuals to invest their time and energy for better educational system.
Additionally, the closest high school is the one that many parents prefer. According to the school’s district, parents can decide where they can buy homes or lands.
In this fast growing world, industrialization and educational advancement have taken a major role. Considering learning plays a significant role in our life so, everyone has to put the effort to raise the standard educational system. As far as I concerned, I strongly support the idea about building a new high school in my community due to two main reasons I will explain in this essay.
To begin with, population's ratio increased drastically. We need a new high school to be built for getting the advantages of that. Many employees seeking the opportunity to get their lovely career and I believe teachers will obtain the chance to teach in new high school in my community rather than teaching abroad. Consequently, more employees will have a chance to work as a teachers, administrative, or even front desk workers. For instance, the community that I used to live in, we are having just one high school besides, I met vast of teachers and professors seeking jobs abroad or to the cities closest to mine. That affect the economic and educational levels of our community. This will enhance individuals to invest their time and energy for better educational system.
Additionally, the closest high school is the one that many parents prefer. According to the school’s district, parents can decide where they can buy homes or lands.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 374, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a teacher' or simply 'teachers'?
Suggestion: a teacher; teachers
...employees will have a chance to work as a teachers, administrative, or even front desk wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, if, so, as to, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 223.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02242152466 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98798764056 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609865470852 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0931645778 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309791193063 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131033858241 0.076458572812 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.224741787341 0.0737576698707 305% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247084232975 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.299244905377 0.0645574589148 464% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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