Following are three choices to protect the local environment. Which one do you think is the best and explain why.
1. Plant trees and create gardens
2. Local shops do not provide consumers with plastic bags
3. Take public transportation and reduce the use of private cars on local roads
To protect the local environment where people live, work or doing any other activities is an important.And, people have to think their environment.There are several options for communities' environments protection.Some of them are the good but some other less good than good methods.
First of all, people should think which method is the best for their environments.Because, their choosing does not impact their environments positively.For example, if people live green environment they should not think create gardens and plant trees.Almost all techniques which using for the world security affect positively and one of them is the perfect.
Also, today there are several pollution problem in the world environment, and all of them caused by human's activities such as consuming a gas, a plastic bag.No reason comes from a natural process.So, I think the protection started less pollution.For that,people should change their behaviours to an ecosystem.
In addition, the worst thing which affect human's places is using more a patrol.Consuming patrol causes spreading CO2, and producing carbon dioxide affect all living remains such as animals, plants, human.For decreasing pollution people should take subway ticket, and they sell their own cars.And, countries governments encourage their population to use public transportation vehicles.
In my opinion, if people want to consider the method which using protection they should develop their transportation mechanisms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 52.1666666667 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 218.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79357798165 4.8611393121 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30549389269 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623853211009 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.1344086022 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.4136454911 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 252.6 100.406767564 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.6 20.6045352989 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.4 5.45110844103 356% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160041524362 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911956257744 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0102084970648 0.0737576698707 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911956257744 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102084970648 0.0645574589148 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 11.7677419355 235% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 58.1214874552 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 10.1575268817 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.19 10.9000537634 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.01818996416 133% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 10.002688172 210% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.0537634409 191% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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