There is sometimes an acute question for people to change their occupation. This happens when people get bored, frustrated or tired of something they are doing at the moment. If one of my friend decided to alter careers, I would suppose them to develop in sales, design or education.
Regarding the first, I would recommend going to sales to a friend of mine who has quite a lot of experience in communication with other people. I think this person is reasonably good at understanding what other people want that I suppose is a good quality for somebody working as a sales person. Apart from being profitable, this job is relatively convenient as a person can decide their working hours themselves. It is also interesting because you communicate with different people and experience new things such as travelling for goods. However, it is very competitive since nowadays a lot of people work there. In addition, it may be unstable and grueling on your social life since it takes a lot of time.
Another sphere that I can think of which is also very beneficial is design. Being all time developing it requires a person to carry on self-educating and finding new ways to develop their skills. You also have an opportunity to change your routine every day because this work is never the same. On the other hand, a designer must take into account the affordability of the customers so it can be quite difficult to arrange your ideas to a certain financials limit. I would recommend this job to a friend who is quite good at art and managing finances at the same time.
Finally, the sphere I have some experience in is education. Being a teacher or professor is really demanding due to high academic requirements. Another disadvantage is that the payment there is not always satisfactory. Nevertheless, people who find themselves in teaching have the sense of fulfillment with their students’ achievements. Also working with young people is suitable for a person who is looking for changes.
To conclude, despite the fact that many interesting options of changing somebody’s career path exist in the world, the abovementioned occupations are necessary for people who are ready for changes in their lives and do not want to be fixed in one place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: WANT_THAT_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'want me to'?
Suggestion: want me to
...good at understanding what other people want that I suppose is a good quality for somebody ...
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Line 4, column 343, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...with their students' achievements. Also working with young people is suitable f...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, really, regarding, so, apart from, as to, i suppose, i think, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90837696335 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95680019885 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528795811518 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7530284666 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100395900752 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294305021119 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333291412324 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563193056307 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250460945753 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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