A friend of yours has received some money and plans to use all of it either * to go on vacation * to buy a car Your friend has asked you for advice. Compare your friend`s two choices and explain which one you think your friend should choose. Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
Some people prefer to spend their money on something valuable whereas the others think it is better to spend it for personal enjoyments. Sometimes the correct decision is really difficult and we have to evaluate situations. In my opinion, if someone does not have his own car, he should purchase one instead of wasting it.
First of all, we use our private car regularly to go to university, work, home and shopping. Imagine a cold snowing winter that you need to buy some vegetables to cook soup. Without a good car, it is near impossible to go out of home because there is no taxi or train outside. In addition, in emergency events like getting sick, we need personal vehicle significantly. Therefore, it is crucial to own a good car in the world of transportation.
Furthermore, my husband and I have visited 26 states in United State of America with our car. To be honest, it is more enjoyable to travel with car than airplane or bus. Although it seems a little bit hard to drive eight hours constantly, we are able to see every single natural attraction and stop whenever we desire. Thus, spending money for travel instead of buying a proper automobile take away the opportunity of more trips from you.
Admittedly, for young adults it sounds great to visit Italy of France so they want to pay even expensive cost. We can eliminate this concern if we explain that it is better to experience in short trips and prepare themselves for longer ones later. It is not reasonable to start our first trip with either difficult one or expensive one. In my view, postponing continental journeys after third decades of our life is more logical.
To wrap up, buying a car is a better choice not only for those who are in urgent conditions but also for those who are interested in travel. Having our own car gives us a lot of fantastic opportunities to live more easier.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...an airplane or bus. Although it seems a little bit hard to drive eight hours constantly, w...
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Line 6, column 210, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... lot of fantastic opportunities to live more easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, third, thus, whereas, in addition, in short, first of all, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65256797583 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67373478751 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622356495468 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.0116046945 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5555555556 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129571694451 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386069168018 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317331574143 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704029498349 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167577437057 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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