A friend of yours has received some money and plans to use all of it either to go on vacation or to buy a car your friend has asked you for advice.
If my friend asks me for the advice if he receives some money and wants to decide whether to go on vacation or to purchase the car then I would recommend him to purchase the new car rather than go on vacation. Because purchasing a new car is having several advantages and reasons too.
One reason for purchasing a new car is that he wanted to spend all his money and purchasing a car from that will be a huge investment even if he purchases it on the installments. Once he gets a car he can go on vacation anytime in the future by his own car rather than renting other and spend lots of money on rent each time. So his money will be saved after this investment. And spend all money only on one vacation is quite unreasonable. Because he will not get anything from it for the future.
The second reason is that if he purchases a new car it will be helpful to him for other things too. Like in the rainy season he will be able to go safely to the office than the motorcycle. Car is useful in winter as well as in summer to protect ourself from dramatic weather.
The third reason is carpooling. He will save money which is used for fuel simply by carpooling. If he travels by his motorcycle he will be required the same amount of fuel and money. But if he travels by carpooling then cost of fuel divided onto maybe four people. And the effects of fuel gases on the environment will also be reduced.
Although the purchasing of a new car is having few disadvantages like space requires to park the car, expenditure spend on maintenance is too high. But there are more advantages too so that we can neglect these disadvantages. Therefore I will recommend my friend to purchase a new car only.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'parking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: parking
...g few disadvantages like space requires to park the car, expenditure spend on maintenan...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...hat we can neglect these disadvantages. Therefore I will recommend my friend to purchase ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, third, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32389937107 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57749055038 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468553459119 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7300519825 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3888888889 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192087641919 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672630996761 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677311747925 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122335416101 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678366043675 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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