games and social activities should be a part of education system?
Sport is an integral part of life. An English saying is that “Only a study and no fun make john a dull boy." Some people state that folic and social activities should be part of a formal education. While other individuals hold a different attitude. As far as, I am concerned, I vote for a former choice that a pastime and social activities should be in universities. Let me explain my point of view.
There are numerous reasons for me to support my point. First, games are necessary in a life. It helps us to abridge stress which we gain from a daily hectic schedule. For a quintessence, I am studying in a college. I my college, our university bureaucracy an organize social activities like garba party, holi celebration, an independence’s day celebration and so on. By these we can meet each other, feel vicissitude from a routine boring lecture. I think these are a treasure for us and our professor. We back to study with a full of joy and freshness.
Second, another reason why I advocate an attitude of games should be subject of class. The teamwork is a basic thing for a success. By participating in games, pupils can learn a communication acumen, leadership, cooperation and so on. Games like football, cricket, hockey are mediocre pastimes help us to maintain our a physical and mental health, help in reducing blood pressure and other a heart related problems. For epitome, I had 70kg weight when I was in 10th standard. When I joined a game in my school, I could maintain myself and made me healthy.
Last but not least, An advanced technology in a library is a necessary for better edification. By use of internet, students can gain a knowledge of an every subject. Even tutors can learn a basic need of subjects through internet for teaching pupils. A well equipped library may bring prosperity in student’s life if he or she uses it in proper manner.
From taking account of all merits, I can safely draw conclusion that games and social activities should be part of regular the erudition. One can refresh his or her torpid mood by participating in co-curricular activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77595628415 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03074809628 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601092896175 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1905620258 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.92 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.64 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.12 5.45110844103 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230071287619 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546690438862 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946310104782 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142277085109 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1103829336 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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