Getting up early vs. staying up late
We are living in a sophisticated age time of getting up has a profound impact on one’s daily activities. People are always trying to make their lives more convenient, delightful and successful. Some people believe that staying up late and doing some activities during the night are better than getting up early. However, others take an opposite point of view and believe that getting up early is better than staying up late. I think the advantages of getting up late clearly outweigh than its disadvantages. For this reason, I strongly and without any doubt agree with the latter idea. There are some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
First of all, undoubtedly, at the beginning of the day, people have a lot of energy and they are able to concentrate on their issues easily. As a matter of fact, if people get up early, they could do their works properly because their mind refresh after sleeping. To illustrate this fact, one only needs to refer the prosperous people who always get up early. Seldom can people be successful if they stay up late. Although some people have more time to do their work if they stay up late, I am sure that their productivity will decrease. Furthermore, what result from getting up early is to enhance the level of health in our lives. According to metabolism rate of body, it is better for people get up early. The noteworthy intelligible results, which conducted in our body, show that the high percentage people getting up early, are one who bring healthier in their life.
The second reason why I agree with it is that, obviously, the important programs in universities and offices are scheduled at the beginning of the day. In fact, if people do not miss these important programs, they should get up early. The modern world offers abundant example people could be successful if they do not miss these important program. I am sure that if student want to be graduate in time they should get the courses which scheduled at the beginning of the day. So, if I were to be a determiner in our country, I would have not allowed the employees come office late. In addition to the aforementioned notes, there is a well-known proverb in Persian, the equivalent of which in English may sound like this” early birds catch a worm”. The proverb also clarifies the fact that if people stay up late, they will miss the best moment of their lives that they should do at morning.
To make a long story short, no one can deny the enormous positive effect of getting up early. Not only are they able to their work readily with the high level of concentration, but also they will be successful because they do not miss the important program scheduling at morning. For this reason, I highly recommended that in order to be prosperous people should get up early.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, well, i think, in addition, in fact, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2351.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73038229376 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63982369824 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450704225352 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 732.6 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9198997492 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.04 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.88 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.24 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377783567291 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14035753325 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12733462618 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274229642664 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124171493102 0.0645574589148 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.