Essay topics:
The good properties of father and mother
The father and mother are the most effective object in the life of children. In my opinion, there are a couple of things that the parents should have. The first is to being friend with their children and the second is disciplinarian. If the parents are to being friend with their children, the children always feel to have a strong supporter, for example, the children’s problems will be solved by parents. In addition, the disciplinarian of parents helps children to find their ways during the life. Sometimes, the children lose the right way that in this situation, their parents must lead them to discover the correct way. Furthermore, they sometimes do a good thing that they must be encouraged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 52.1666666667 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 586.0 1977.66487455 30% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 119.0 407.700716846 29% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9243697479 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30283395202 4.48103885553 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85256677535 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 212.727598566 35% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 168.3 618.680645161 27% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.679983527 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7142857143 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 5.45110844103 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0720269038246 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453722294923 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832722714625 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720269038246 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 86.8835125448 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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